unfinished fantasy on Apr 1st, 2004 12:04:01 pm EST
This is a work in progress, that I'm writing by request - I don't generally post fantasies in here, but I quite like the way this one is going so far, so thought I'd share it... here we go...

"I believe you have a room?"

It’s the question you ask as I open the door. A mutual friend gave you my address, knowing I was looking for a temporary lodger. The house is a little scary, English Gothic, which had unnnerved you a little as you walked up the driveway, but you’re relieved to see a friendly face as I open the door – not a scary, haggard old butler after all, just a normal looking guy.

I notice you looking me up and down as I stand at the door – you look familiar, I’m sure I’ve seen you before, but I just can’t place you. I smile at you, a warm smile – there’s an instant connection – our eyes meet for a moment, and my heart beats a little faster – that empty feeling in my stomach - what’s wrong with me? Instant lust from eye contact with a complete stranger? That isn’t like me – I try not to think about it, smiling again, noticing your face flushing slightly, inviting you inside.

You follow me through into the hallway – you don’t know what it is about me, but you’re warmer almost immediately – it was something about my eyes when I looked at you – a sudden need that flashed between the two of us. This is ridiculous, you think, he’s barely spoken to me - he’s probably not even interested in me. And who cares if he is? You watch my bum secretly as I lead you through to the kitchen.

"You can use the kitchen whenever you want," I smile. "I don’t cook much, and I’ll work round you." I smile again – I’m drawn once more to your eyes, lingering for a moment. You look back, melting a little, despite yourself – you’re not sure what to say – something banal about cooking? Is that what he wants me to say? Hasn’t he noticed how I’m looking at him? Why am I looking at him anyway?

I stop myself looking at you, deliberately looking away – what is it about you? If I keep looking at you like this, you’re gonna think I’m some sort of sex pervert. I’m supposed to be showing you the house. I lead you though to the lounge. "This is sort of a communal room," I smile, "there’s a tv in your room, you don’t have to come in here, it’s up to you…"

There’s an atmosphere already between us, an unspoken, immediate mutual desire. You’re not interested in the house. You’re not interested in me. I talk too much. You wish I’d just shut up and stand there while you look at me. Leaning there on the sofa while you look at me from the doorway, wanting me, not listening to what I’m saying, just watching the way I move, wishing you were bold enough to just walk up and start unbuttoning my shirt, wondering how I’d respond. I look back at you again from against the sofa, seeing you framed in the doorway – your eyes are all over me, and I can’t help looking at you, at your face, at the curves of your body, wanting you again, wondering what you’d say if I was to just press you against the wall and hitch up your skirt, slide my body between your thighs.

"I’ll show you upstairs," I mumble, brushing past you for a moment at the doorway, heading up the staircase. You follow me. You can feel yourself getting wet. This is ridiculous, you remind yourself again. He’s just showing me round the house. I’m not going to fuck him - I don’t even know who he is. Where is he taking me again? Why are we going upstairs? "This is the bathroom." I smile. "If the door’s shut, it means I’m probably naked in there." "Right," you say. "You should do the same," I continue, "if you’re in here… if you're naked… y’know… or I might come in…". "Yes’" you reply. You can barely hear me. Something about being naked? "Is my room up here?" you ask. You look at me again. It’s all I can do not to touch you. "Yes," I reply, "I’ll show you…"

I lead you through the door opposite the bathroom. It’s a big room, a double bed, a fireplace, huge windows overlooking the courtyard. You’re hardly looking at it. I follow you through the door. "What do you think?" I ask. You turn to look at me. Our eyes meet again, burning now. I can’t take this any more. I lift my hand towards your face, slipping my fingers through your hair. You tremble, unable to stop this now, not wanting to stop it. I pull you gently towards me, tugging your hair a little, moving closer, and suddenly I’m kissing you, sensually, passionately, lustfully, greedily, your own lips returning the kiss, your tongue caressing mine as I move you back against he wall, pressing close, my body against yours, my fingers drifting through your hair, my kisses working their way down from your lips, finding your neck, kissing along it, biting gently as you gasp deliciously, my body warm against your own...

You're lost in the moment now, your hands drifting down my back, down to my bum, pulling me closer to you as I press you against the wall, my lips caressing your neck, my hands sliding down your body, over your hips, down to your skirt, tugging it up a little, my lips returning to your mouth, kissing you again, sensually, greedily. You don't even know why you're doing this - we've barely spoken - just this urgent need, a connection we've made in those few glances - you can't stop it now - you don't want to.

You're melting at my touch, kissing me with deep sexual abandon, needing me, wanting me, gripping my bum, rubbing yourself against me, feeling my body moving with yours as we kiss passionately. My hands have found the hem of your skirt, tugging it up your thighs, all the way up to your waist, and you part your thighs, feeling my body slide between them, your hands somehow finding the button of my jeans, unfastening it, tugging down the zip, grabbing hold of the waist and starting to pull them down.

I'm filled with lust for you now - I need to see you naked - I pull off your coat as we kiss urgently, throwing it to the floor, my fingers reaching your blouse, tugging open the buttons, quickly working my way down, still kissing you, unable to unfasten the last couple, giving up and just tearing your blouse open, the buttons scattering on the floor somewhere, looking down at you, at your breasts, still covered in a black lace bra, my hands sliding quickly round to your back.

You're still struggling with my jeans, pulling them down my thighs, one of your hands slipping between my legs, feeling my cock inside my pants, gasping at your first touch. I'm very, very erect - you feel yourself getting wet as you touch me, and I gasp as your fingers slide against my cock, rubbing me through my pants.

I've managed to unclip your bra now, my hands sliding up to your blouse, pulling it off your shoulders, throwing it to the floor. Your own hands reach up to my shirt, too turned on to unbutton it, just tearing it open, looking down at me, filled with lust, your hands sliding up over my bare chest, over my nipples. I tug your bra off your shoulders, pulling it off, breathing hard as I see your naked breasts, loving the view, my hands sliding up over them, caressing them, stroking them softly, feeling your nipples harden at my touch, my lips working down your neck again, pressing my body between your thighs as I pin you against the wall, moving against you rhythmically now.

Your hands find the waistband of my pants - dammit, you need to see my cock - you tug my pants down my thighs, one of your hands sliding back up through my hair, kissing me greedily, your other hand finding my cock, sliding your fingers against my warm, hard erection. I gasp with pleasure, and you begin to stroke me, rubbing gently up and down my cock, feeling my hard penis throbbing in your hand.

My own hands take hold of your panties, pulling them down, letting them drop to your ankles - you kick them off, spreading your thighs now, sliding your hands over my bare buttocks, pulling me hard against you, suddenly feeling my erection hard against your naked belly, our mouths greedily kissing again, my hands reaching under your thighs, lifting you up against the wall - you wrap your legs around me, kissing me hard - suddenly you feel the tip of my erection sliding between the lips of your cunt - you're drenched, you need me inside you - sliding against me, you lift up a little until my cock is in just the right place - then you slide down onto me, groaning with pleasure as I slide into your sex, your wet cunt engulfing my erection, and I groan deliciously, thrusting my cock up deep inside you, starting to fuck you against the wall...

I’m inside you now, our bodies entwined as we fuck against the wall, both of us naked, your legs wrapped around my body, clinging onto me, your arms around my neck, kissing me sensually, passionately, my own hands gripping your thighs, holding you up off the floor as I press you against the wall, returning your kisses greedily, urgently, my cock thrusting again and again deep into your dripping wet cunt, your juices pouring down my penis now, dripping down over my balls, so wet, so incredibly wet, your cunt splashing around my erection with each hard, deep thrust inside you.

It’s so intense, so quick, our bodies moving deliciously against each other – it feels so good – you’re so turned on so quickly – you know you’re not gonna be able to hold back your orgasm – you need to come hard and fast, all your senses centered on my cock, my hard, erect, thrusting cock, pounding into your cunt, over and over again - you grind down onto it, pulling me closer, your bare breasts pressed against my chest, your naked body sliding against my own, feeling me thrust even deeper inside you.

You groan with pleasure, your body trembling now, gasping hard with each thrust of my hard penis, your cunt squeezing around my cock, feeling it pushing deeper and deeper, filling you... fucking you... oh god so hard… fucking you and fucking you and fucking you… you can’t take any more… you cry out with intense pleasure, your body shuddering hard, convulsing, intense pleasure spreading from your cunt, throbbing and pulsing as you start to come – you scream with pleasure, grinding down hard onto my cock, your wetness suddenly gushing down over my erection, streaming from your cunt, your orgasm pulsating hard through your body, clinging onto me, your cunt engulfing my throbbing cock as you come frantically, urgently, an intense, incredible orgasm, your juices pouring down over my erect penis.

I somehow hold back my own orgasm, keeping my cock deep and hard in your cunt as your orgasm shudders through your body – I know I can’t hold back long, my erection throbbing intensely inside you now - but I want you to come again.

Lifting you from against the wall, your legs still clinging onto me, your body still trembling hard, I carry you over to the bed, my cock still hard, erect and throbbing inside you, laying you onto your back, sliding on top of you, draping your legs over my shoulders, and I start to fuck you again, really deep now, my body coated with sweat, dripping down from my forehead, my belly slapping hard against the back of your thighs as I thrust hard and deep, again and again - my cock so wet, so hard, pounding and pounding into your cunt, looking down at you, at the intense pleasure on your face, seeing you needing to come again, watching your breasts move with each thrust, leaning down to take one into my mouth, my lips and tongue lapping greedily at your erect nipple.

You’re gonna come again, you can’t stop it - still trembling and throbbing from your first orgasm, your hands grip my bum, pulling me deep and hard inside you, again and again and again... oh god it feels so good... ohh god that’s it... you feel yourself coming again... you cry out frantically, your body shuddering into delicious convulsions, more of your wetness streaming from your cunt, pouring down my cock – it’s all I can take – I groan urgently, my erection throbbing hard now – I can feel my cum surging up the length of my penis – I cry out frantically, thrusting my cock deep inside you, my body shaking as I start to come, my cock pulsing and throbbing and pulsing and throbbing, my cum spurting.... ohh god so much cum... still shuddering through your own orgasm, you scream with delight, your fingernails raking down my back as you feel my penis explode inside you, my spunk spurting from my throbbing cock, pouring hard and deep into your orgasming cunt, spurt after spurt of warm cum, flooding deep inside you, filling you, filling your cunt, over and over and over again…

(more to follow...)
Mood: revealing
5 Comments

Comments:

sexymagickdesires April 01st, 2004
intense

DirtyTalkinGirl April 01st, 2004
Wow. Yess.

But--not only hot wow. Wow writing too. You've used a kind of double point of view--alternating "I" and "you". We see the sex from both sides, as it were. Once I got into it, it really worked for me. Thanks!

dirtyboy April 01st, 2004
thankyou to both of you x - it's sort of an experiment, and I think the two points of view can be a bit disorientating at first, but it's close to what I was after. I'm planning to do more (still from the two points of view), and assuming I do, I'll post it here...

frozendesire April 02nd, 2004

As usual I loved this and can't wait to read the next part. I've said it before and I'll say it again, you definately have a talent of which I'm jealous. Keep up that good work xxx

dirtyboy April 02nd, 2004
thankyou sexypants x

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